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Hello,handsomeboys.
I'm Wulin and I'm from shantou city Guangdong province . I'm so happy and my pleasure to be standing here. I'm glad to have this chance to talk with you. I like sports such as basketball ,football, table tennis so on . I also like reading and playing computer games , so everyday is so full and I enjoy every minute of it .
Now, I want to talk about good habits and bad habits. I believe everyone have some good habits and bad habits. What's the good habits and what's the bad habits? For eaxmple, swearing is a bad habit, nics words lke"thank you "is a good habit,"reading"is a good habits,smoking is a bad habit,like this . The bad habits will make you become a rude ,unhealthy, even less popular person. Contrary , the good habits can make you become good mannered and popular person.
To conclude ,i hope that everyone can give up all the bad habits and develop some good habits.This is all I have to say today .Thank you !
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Now,i want to talk about good habits and bad habits.I believe everyone have some good haits and bad habits.what's the good habits ?what's the bad habits? For example,Swearing is a bad habit,Say the discourse of civilization is a good habit,reading is a good habits,smoking is a bad habit,like those , the bad habits will be able to make you become rude and impolite. Contrary,the good habits can make you become gentle and polite..
Without any further ado,i hope that everyone can change bad habits and try to cultivate some good habits
.that's all. thank you
Hello everyone, I'm Wulin from Shantou city in Guangzhou province. I'm happy to be here and to have a chance to talk with you. I prefer a lot of sports such as basketball, soccer, and table tennis. I also prefer reading book and playing computer games. My life is filled with many enjoyable moments.
Now, I want to talk about good and bad habits. Everyone has good and bad habits; however, what are they exactly?
We all now that cursing or smoking are bad habits while saying "thank you" or reading books are good ones. Therefore, bad habits can lead you to become a rude, unhealthy or even a less popular individual; on the contrary, good habits can make you a gentle and welcomed person.
Lastly, I hope you can develop your bad habits to good habits. Thank you.
